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Showing posts with label Angel. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Angel. Show all posts

Sunday, September 27, 2009

Angel: Chapters 16-20

Alright, so, Chapter 16 filled in a few places, and got us further along in our questions and theories. But we obviously, are still questioning. I think I know what's happening, but I can't be sure. Maybe I'm finally recognizing the official plot line.
Chapter 17 was very good and defintly what a part of what everything has been leading up to. The chapter was a little rushed, but still enjoyable. And this chapter is a filler, and I wish could've had more of a longing and romantic quality to it, but it didn't. And that's okay. I guess they all can't be like Stephenie Meyers. But there has been no physical contact between Bella and Edward, and that is extremly frustrating to me. Like in every story, I absolutly love Alice's character to death. Although, what is bothering me, is how whatever or whoever happened to Charlie, how calm and cool Bella reacted. We all know that if Edward--in SM form--found out that Carlisle was missing, he would take off from school imeediatly. I'm kind of disappointed that Bella didn't do that. Well, the ending kept me, and I'm sure all of you out there reading along with me, want and have to read the next chapter.

Chapter 18, my thoughts: EDWARD, EDWARD, EDWARD! STUPID, STUPID, STUPID! Poor Bella...she knew, and he, an oh gahwd... Yeah, that pretty much sums it up. Well, the beginning problem was covered up well. Um, the conversation was cute, but I'm still looking for that "sexual tension"--sorry for the phrase--that was shown in Stephenie Meyer's Twilight. WTF! Why didn't you listen to Bella, Edward? You know that she shouldn't be around blood. And whether you know it or not, your blood is the most tempting! She offered to be with you for two different and obvious reasons. OMFG, you're an idiot! Mutters: stupid blood testing...
Confusion is more like it Charlie. Sooo...Charlie isn't Bella's dad? Or son? Or whatever? He was over-exaggerating their love maybe? I don't know. Maybe it's just an odd father-daughter relationship. And even though that the vision of Edward and Bella wasn't really there, it was amazing to finally even get a taste of them being together. For them to be longing for each other. I wish there was more of that. This chapter didn't have to be here. And it's just adding to my endless mental list of unanswered questions. It had better answer some more here soon... Maybe Bella's a tramp who 'plays' with different guys' hearts at the same time. I don't know...I accepted more honor...even from this Bella.
OHHH! Okay. So in the introduction to Chapter 20, the author clearly stated resolving many of my newly formed questions, that there is NO "relationship" between Charlie and Bella like what she and Edward and have. And she also basically confirmed in that explanation, that Charlie and Bella are father and daughter. I've come to an understanding. Okay, so questions were answered...to an extent. Stop trying to hate Edward! Even as a human he's awesome. I don't care what you said to Carlisle, about your unbeknowst failed want to keep Charlie safe, I don't care what freaks are out there that you do or don't know about! LOVE EDWARD! That's the story I want to read, Bella. And the ending: is it Charlie? the evil vampire Rachel who took him? was she gonna hurt edward (asshole, Rachel)? whats gonna happen? whats wrong Bella (why havent you made out with Edward already)?


Why do I have to stop reading? Grrrr.

9/10 rating
Read Angel here.

Peace Love Twilight

Sunday, September 20, 2009

Fan Fiction: Angel, Chapters 11-15

I'm finally started to understand what is going on and I have weaved several things together, so this way I'm only questioning a few. The title has been represented, and I always think it's cool when that happens. Um, I couldn't stop reading. I love books that do that. I also love books and stories that make me predict and make me wonder at the same time. I love what going on here, and I know how I would end the story. Yet, I am anxious to here how she ends the story. The author is suprising me, and herself it seems like. The Cullen's family bond is admirable. Different from Stephenie Meyer's wording, but kept with a familiar quality. Edward's POV always fascinate and entertain me. But, Carlisle's and Alice's were clearly needed for the development.




Rating: 9/10

Read Angel here.



Peace Love Twilight

Fan Fiction: Angel, Chapters 6-10

Alright, so the plot is finally showing itself in the writing. There is a hint of question that lead you to metacognition...which you need to have in all good writing and reading. This is transforming into a planned, different, and creative writing piece. Nothing like it had started out. In some ways, I like where the story seems to be heading, and in others I wish it would've stayed where it was at. I'm sure all the readers and myself agree that Edward POV should've been the whole story...

But I digress--yes against myself. We do need Bella's POV in some situations.


Now the rating of 'Angel' is 8/10
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Peace Love Twilight

Fan Fiction Review: Angel, Chapters 1-5

So I just mentioned this fan fiction for Bella Swan, and it's about how Edward human falls in love with Bella vampire. And I really got interested in it, so I had to keep reading. I had to FORCE myself to stop at chapter five, so I could do a review for you guys.
All I can say is that, even though the writing has a slight hint of ameature, I was impressed. Getting into Edward's mind wasn't that hard, and I also appreciated the slight "hints" of the supernatural powers that they would've had as vampires.


So far I'm rating Angel, with a 9/10
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Peace Love Twilight